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Thirteen Syllables Or Less

morning dew clings silk dances in the breeze deadly threads Contest: Thirteen Syllables Or Less Sponsored By: Timothy Hicks Written: 3/29/2016

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:23:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Greg..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2016 8:48:00 PM

hmmm, that last line is mysterious to me, but it makes for a great twist. I see it won. BIG congrats to you. (ha, I looked below to see Tim's comment to you. Can't believe I did not think of spiderweb)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/31/2016 8:35:00 AM

Greetings Greg. Congrats for your wonderful WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 3:25:00 AM

Congrats Greg! It certainly would be deadly if a spider was still hanging on! I get a panoramic view with this poem ... the clinging of the grass, and the flight of the threads. Well done!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2016 3:17:00 PM

fabulous imagery - good luck!:-) hugs jan xx