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Thirsty Soul

A bubbling brook Attracts a doe and her fawn They drink of her soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 2:50:00 PM
Nicely done, Larry. ...Ralph
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Date: 6/22/2010 1:14:00 PM
Wonderful Larry, I try and try to write something meaningful about deer..and here youve done it in 3 lines. BG
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Date: 6/22/2010 12:56:00 PM
The imagery in this haiku is lovely. I also like the embedded message. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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