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Thirsty Sea (Slightly Mature Content)

the indelible scent of ecstasy filled their auras with the fragrance of lovemaking spent and aroused passion anxious to be tasted then devoured…skin forged on skin…a magical collaboration of need satisfying need…moments when love takes you far beyond reality…no limits… no borders…nothing refused… your physical surrender a mere formality as flesh seeks flesh… frolicking taste-buds unlocking rivers of dreams whose surge simply washes away the pain of loveless droughts past …in a heartbeat forever forgotten all resistance simply ripped away as flame licks ice as if it were candy… mouths drawn to loins scented by eucalyptus that once inhaled becomes unforgettable and forevermore addictive as the taste of warm summer honey cloaks the soul the strength of passion is found in its gentleness the luxury of being touched so deeply…so intimately your soul is turned inside out…eager to respond the relentless tongue victoriously plays hide and seek as a master…once found you beg for the mercy of more you are never the same again…ever…as if a thirsty sea lay within your soul and its tide is forever restless paradise found …over and over…emptiness abandoned as if a decree by the gods of love…two scents becoming one..the air you breathe forever shared…the promise of forever scratched on your skin as if you were a trophy Irish ST PADDY'S DAY 2010

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Date: 3/27/2010 4:47:00 PM
such a romantic, very passionate poem.its a much more desirable, with a deep and searing sensation.this isn't overboard at all.if its this love you are writing so deeply about, then it must be an ardent thirst, for the deepest level, spirit love through the human body. wonderful poem.beautiful. i think i might favorite this. -soup mail- -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/27/2010 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words on my poems today. They mean a great deal, more than you could realize and especially today. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:49:00 PM
Dear Michael, To some this maybe on the border but I think it is extremely Well Done My POEM "LOVE - A Letter of Intent" Pales to this Erotic write and I left a Footnote Apologizing if they found it Offendsive and no one did It's late and I have to work early but I will read YOUR other(Slightly Adult Content) I Applaude YOUR Ingenuity YOUR Liege ALWAYS ...HG
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Date: 3/25/2010 3:53:00 PM
Terrific piece Michael, i totally agree with Carolyn. This write is crafted with care, a most enjoyable read indeed >> James
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:51:00 AM
Hi Michael, I don't think this poem steps over the line at all. Great, romantic writing~ Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2010 8:59:00 PM
that was fantastic, it just flowed , very erotic.
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:28:00 PM
Reply from irish... I am trying a new writing style where i deliberately insert a word that carries the reader automatically/in flow to the next line with out the traditional break to a new sentence. In doing this i have found the ability to open a poem wide when writing because you think in longer/more expressive terms it is a fun way to write and i will continue it. again, thanks for checking my poem out that means a lot to me!
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:03:00 PM
wow this poem had a run feel to it, each word seemed to run to the other and just keep going, lots of passion in this, good poem.
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