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July moon, third quarter, patrols the night. Pierces smoky haze, phosphor and cordite. No crump of shell or rattle of gunfire just stillness, man made brambles, wooden posts and wire. Not so much a breeze, more a draught carries distant murmurs. Someone laughed. A sudden spark, and glow- sentry had lit a match. Breathe slowly. Unlock the safety catch. Flame moves left to right as he watched. Gaze down the barrel, through the sight, line up the V-shaped notch. A brief flicker of face, then silhouette, not quite time to pull the trigger yet. Light moves right to left, match handed back. Face number three aglow, and then- crack. Extinguished.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/10/2018 11:09:00 PM
Great imagery Viv, could picture the hell of trench warfare in WW1. Tom.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/11/2018 12:48:00 AM
After 40 years working shifts at the PO my body clock doesn't know if its morning, noon or night lol
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Viv Wigley
Date: 9/10/2018 11:12:00 PM
Thanks, Tom, what are you doing up at this ungodly hour?

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