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Thinking Out Loud

Thinking Out loud _______________ _______________ _ I am yours, flesh and blood gave to you, from God above Here I am, but you are not don't forget, what you have got. All these years, we've been apart I hurt you, cause you broke my heart a little girl, I'm not anymore years have passed, just like before. Time for a change, one would think, talk to me, and not the drink A firstborn, who's been the last hope for the present, hate for the past. There's is others, I can see if your there for them, be there for me Do they know, cause I exist even if ...I'm the bottom on your list. 7/2/14- Jessica Thompson

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Date: 7/4/2014 1:05:00 AM
Oh Jess is this based on real life because it is so sad, I got quite emotional when I read it, take care my friend............Vera..........
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Date: 7/4/2014 11:56:00 PM
Yeah, my Dad has never really been around ever, and when it was it was brief. He just upsets me to no ends. But anyways..life is life and I go on. Thank you for stoping by my dear friend. Take care~ Jess :)
Date: 7/3/2014 8:29:00 AM
Oh girl, wow, emotional! Great to read you, Happy hugs :) :)
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Date: 7/3/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, always have an nice time reading your wonderful comments. Take care my friend, Jess
Date: 7/3/2014 12:40:00 AM
this one BURNED ME. I Feel You SOOOO much on this! So much, In fact, I avoid writing poems on this off limits subject, Like the PLAGUE. One day, I will spew out the madness like u did here PoeteSS! I commend you for thinking out loud on this one, It is Brave, It hurts, it sucks, and damn if it don't make for BRILLIANT POETRY! Keep flyin', ridin' that magic carpet, Poetic GENIE-ous!~JSL 7rate all day with this hot joint. FIRE~
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Date: 7/3/2014 8:04:00 PM
JSL, Thank you so much for coming by and commenting. I really appreciate all you kind words. I am sorry that you have been there too, in this situation. I feel like when I write...I can get anything off my chest. Thanks my new friend~ Take care~ Jess

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