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Thinking of You

Thinking of your smile makes my day, So inspired to write a poem of what I feel, Can’t take you out of my mind my dear. In my heart you are my love so dear, You always make a brighter day, I hope you really know how I feel. When I wake up every single day, I look at your cool picture my dear, My contented soul shows for what I feel. You complete my day, I feel so happy dear. February 24, 2013 For Andrea's Contest 9th Place Winner

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Date: 3/11/2013 12:02:00 AM
My biggest congratulations on your awesome win too my dearest friend! I'm peeking at soup using the school lap tap. Thank you so much as well for your congratulatory comments my dear friend! love always, Leonora
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:37:00 PM
MARIA, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 8:57:00 PM
Sweet as! You are so good at tritina Maria. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:33:00 PM
wonderful write and win Maria...congrats
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
Maria congrats on your win, this is a great dedication to someone...love it...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful poem here Maria!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:20:00 AM
this was such a sweet happy poem, dear. Congratulations in my contest and thanks so much for your support.
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Date: 3/1/2013 6:46:00 AM
A fantastic tritina! No doubt. I'm blown away with how much I like it. More Maria!
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Date: 2/25/2013 3:41:00 AM
very nice poem, good to see we have good poets in Thailand using English language! Im in chonburi.
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:27:00 PM
wow, wow! This is extremely beautiful poem with extremely beautiful form too my dearest friend, Maria! I'm so glad to read this today. It's one of your best writes indeed! A grand winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always my friend! love and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:49:00 PM
A beautiful love poem, Maria. - (Who would you send it to .... a very special guy.) - Luck in contest!!! - Love it, well done my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:36:00 AM
First time to write this new form, I don't know if I done it right :)
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Michael Dom
Date: 3/1/2013 6:45:00 AM
Brilliant write!

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