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thinking of how it could be

i use to just sit back and look at the grey mountains.
hoping one day i will be there and not just looking.
what is it like being in a world that nothing is bad?
we will never know to we loose something good we had.
what is it like with no pain or man that cheat?
if we didnt have none of them things this world would be neat.
i use to think nothing will hurt me because im a good girl and on my side they will stay.
i use to think that but now its to late.
soon the things you ever grow to love turn into hate........

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  1. Date: 5/16/2010 4:43:00 PM
    Wonderful read Michelle, if only, thinking of how it could be >> James

  1. Date: 3/4/2010 7:39:00 PM
    reflections very well expressed

  1. Date: 2/19/2010 6:28:00 AM
    Wonderful sentiment expressed here, I often feel that way.

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 10:19:00 PM
    Oh, Michelle, I know what you mean. I understand this very well. Great write. Thanks for your comments on my poem. I will read more of yours. Peace and love, audrey

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 11:42:00 AM
    for me actually it's the other way around. the things you hate will grow into things you love, though this takes a lot longer than anyone really wants to admit to themselves, lifetimes even. everyone who cheated you and abandoned you, you thought you loved but really you hated them for your dependence on them. your hate only rose to the surface when they failed to reciprocate your love. if you want to love someone, expect that they will fail you, then love them anyway.

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 4:30:00 AM
    aww a sad but powerful write, thats why the Lord says dont love the things on earth, as they rot, and wither away but if we trust in him and follow him he will make things all good, we will all be free from bad things when he returns, in heaven you will have great treasures, God bless you