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Thinking About You

Thinking about you in so many ways Thinking about you my mind displays Thinking about you as you take my Ice Cream Thinking about you every night when I dream Thinking about you as you turned round my life Thinking about you easing my pasts strife Thinking about you as you bathe alone Thinking about you as we chat on the phone Thinking about you as we lie face to face Thinking about you and our very first embrace Thinking about you! .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/8/2015 3:19:00 AM

It's heartwarming that someone else is thinking about you.. Our God always thinks about us though at times we fail to acknowledge His presence.. :)! the lines above varies to simple lines of how one thinks from sweet thoughts, to healing, to thanking, to desires etc.. :)! this is a sweet poem.. :) do you believe MR. JAmes that when one thinks of the other that other though far away may have also that thought in that time you think about him/ her??? particularly if for somehow you're connected?

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2015 1:53:00 PM

Yes I do Olive, and more recently. I don't have any answers for this, if indeed I do find them, I'll share. Thank you for your always kind words on my humble poetry, James :)x

John Fleming

Date: 1/7/2015 1:22:00 AM

Enjoyable, James! Nice little read. :) john.

James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thank you so much John, always appreciated, James :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/6/2015 5:53:00 PM

sounds like a rap song....love how Jan jumped to conclusions.

James Fraser
Date: 1/7/2015 6:02:00 AM

Reading back I can see what you mean regarding a Rap Song, cool, and Jan's comment made me smile - James :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2015 3:18:00 PM

James dare I ask... are you thinking about someone lol - seriously great write my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 3:38:00 PM

Get you pen out - she'll soon come running:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 1/6/2015 3:33:00 PM

If I am, he's called 'Calvin Harris' - I heard my kids mention the title of one of his tracks and it kinda struck home. Hence a few lines from out there to here - I wish by the way ;) xx James ;)