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Beatiful Scars I cry myself to bed, Every other night. Wondering if I should just be dead, Or keep up the fight. I look into my own eyes, And see nothing but bad. The good has died, But really I am sad. Depression I fight, Wishing it would just go away. I try with my might, But what can I say? Don't just dwell try to change, I promise you won't be the same. By Jacob Fogel 11/24/15

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Date: 11/28/2015 2:37:00 PM
Jacob, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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Jacob Fogel
Date: 11/29/2015 11:01:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/26/2015 4:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Jacob.. great pen!
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:31:00 PM
Jacob..congrats on your win in my first contest..very emotional and deep..:)-lu *smiles*
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:34:00 AM
a beautiful sad free verse poem Jacob, the best of luck in the contest. SKAT
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