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Things About You I Admire

When I read whole poem in its entire There is something about you I admire Poem can produce peace and tranquility Will all your thoughtfulness and ability. Poem you wrote is effective and efficient With steadfast effort that will not relent Always love poems after they are done By God as poet, you are His chosen one. I had been tired and confused for a while Heard word ADMIRE on TV and did compile This very poem you are about to read Helping you reach a goal fulfilling a need. Over and over many words are displayed On this single page and more words I wade Through in my mind so a poem can create When I reach an end to myself I celebrate. Pretty soon in my mind more poems arrive And after chaos and confusion do survive Source was from news and all that I heard About events in world which had occurred. What I thought of and really intended Was write poems and leave them open-ended And when I will do this it does allow a way To add something to poem you wanted to say. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran This is how poem was created.

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Date: 4/23/2015 9:07:00 PM
I love how well you described the creation of poem. Well done.
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Date: 4/23/2015 9:23:00 PM
Nandita, The only well-done thing done about my poem is how well read it was by you. Think I will change my name to Nandito for a poem that is a small nuance. Wow. What is it that Catie and you like about my poems? Jim Horn

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