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Thin Walls

Mallory Hicksby lived all alone in the basement of the Bates Hotel Each night he could hear Norman and his mother arguing through the thin walls that had an off-color smell He lived all alone He was just a lonely person, someone who had no friends Every morning he hated to have to leave his room and go to work He hated to have to shower ... chop chop He wished he could stay in his room always, just listening to Norman and his mother conversing Mallory secretly wished Norman was his friend, someone he could confide in He wished he had a mother like Norman had, they always made up after they got mad But every time he passed Norman in the hall on his way to work, Norman never said hi Norman never said goodbye Norman always looked sad, like he was always about to cry Mallory always wanted to reach out and give Norman a hug He fantasized that Norman and he were best buds He'd tell Norman he wished he had a mother that loved him like that But every time Norman passed him in the hall, he never once looked back He lived all alone He was just a lonely person, someone who had no friends Mallory secretly wished Norman was his friend, someone he could confide in Together they would cross their hearts and hope to die, they would be best friends who would never ask questions why But for now, his secret must be kept hidden The truth must remain buried in the lye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/22/2016 8:51:00 AM
I just remember Norman always saying, "coming mother!!" Can't watch that movie because its too creepy and gives me the heebie-jeebies! Great take on the movie Freddie!:)
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Date: 11/21/2016 4:39:00 PM
Hi Freddie, What a creepy write.Norman Bates freaked me out. Not to me mention his "Psycho" moma. I enjoyed your take on the classic horror flick though. Well done: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/21/2016 4:34:00 PM
Hmmm, that is quite a mysterious take on Bates. Methinks Norman was hiding THREE personalities not just two!! I LOVE that tv series. Do you watch it. I was glad to see one on "dear" Norman.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/21/2016 10:56:00 PM
Ty, Andrea. Yeah, maybe like go to his quiet place in the basement, huh. Interesting theory. No I didn't watch the TV show, part of one episode I think. I love Vera F. though as an actress. I got to much on my plate to watch. I missed that one, heard it was a good show though. Much love to you, dear.
Date: 11/21/2016 3:34:00 PM
Pretty dark closet, Freddie!
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/22/2016 11:15:00 AM
Ty, Daniel. I love the macabre things. Always have since a kid. Don't know if you're old enough to remember Sir Graves Ghastly every Saturday afternoon. It was spooky fun for a kid back in those days. Ty for the cool comment though. Love and peace, bruh.
Date: 11/21/2016 2:27:00 PM
I don't know what was scarier, your poem or the thought if living in the basement of The Bates Hotel. Now I'm creeped out. Nicely done Freddie.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/21/2016 3:00:00 PM
Ty, Chris. Yeah that is creepy ain't it, living in that hotel. Lol! Appreciate the love, bro. Many blessings of love to you.

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