Thick Veil

Fog Thick veil Settles, engulfs, covers Slowly, totally, wraps Condensation

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Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/6/2013 1:17:00 AM

Yes what a picture you have painted with this poem, I see the fog coming in a thick veil, engulfing a valley, the thickness totally covering, well done nice write, blessings sueellen

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/4/2013 6:10:00 AM

Thick Veil indeed...read this one a few times to get everything I could from it...it didn't disappoint. Nice one Sara! MC

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/4/2013 5:28:00 AM

I like this one also dear Sara.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/3/2013 7:45:00 PM

Fog is beautiful. It's fun to go into and there is great anticipation to come out on the other side. What a wonderful place we have to live in.