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Thick Fog

Slowly the fog comes creeping, then swish Fog covers all thickening fast Swirling, shawl like, curtaining Sunflower's yellow gone Wrapped in tapestry Waiting for sun's Appearance Lifted Veil Allegory: Symbolic work: A work in which the characters and events are to be understood as representing other things and symbolically expressing a deeper, often spiritual, moral, or political meaning.. Giorgio

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Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 9:14:00 PM

Sara, , congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 11:20:00 PM

Sara, . CONGRATULATIONS... goodnight....LINDA

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/19/2013 6:05:00 PM

When I read this poem the first time, I was unaware that it was a winning poem in Giorgio's contest...Congratulations on your win! This is a beautiful poem, Sara. I am very surprised that it did not place higher!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/16/2013 2:43:00 PM

I can relate to this poem, because I can feel that there are some hidden emotions within your words. Sometimes a deep feeling of sadness comes over us, and it can change who we are. Similar to depression. And, we are waiting for those sunny days and warm feelings to return. This poem was beautifully written, Sara! And, as you say...it reads like a winner to me! :)

John Posey

Date: 10/15/2013 5:35:00 PM

Most impressive write, my dear Sara. This one had destiny on its side.... Certain to win.... Congratulations....Jake

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/15/2013 8:01:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/15/2013 7:24:00 AM

Congrats on your winning placement, Sara! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/13/2013 11:16:00 AM

A change of season or perhaps one who waits for brighter days. Well written and with nice imagery

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/13/2013 8:11:00 AM

Excellent. a phenomenal write. Nice work. Enjoyed. Tfs

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/12/2013 9:18:00 PM

This is a wonderful and excellent write my friend! You have delighted me by the splendor of this incredible poem here this evening! What a surely allegorical piece, Great Work!!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/12/2013 8:27:00 PM

A great allegory and excellent nonet my dear friend Sara. i love it so much & so enjoyed reading it this morning. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora