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They'll be no hop scotch

They'll be no hop scotch with a broken crotch. No gyrating like Elvis with a fractured pelvis.. Don't plan on doing the hoot Chie cootch. Better settle for a smooch. No leisurely long car rides, not until the pain subsides.. If you are planning to stand, better keep pains meds. at hand. Just want to sit a bit? It's painful until the bones knit.. Our pelvis supports our bodies weight, if fractured one must rest and wait. Two legs are less efficient then four, if there's life after life, I will need two more..

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Date: 5/5/2024 10:07:00 PM
This is so clever. Gosh, did you break your pelvis?
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/6/2024 3:55:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Seven weeks this friday, I fell in a hole with broken asphalt at a near by mall and fractured three tiny pelvis bones. It's a big OUCh. Don't do this ever!! Thanks for your comment dear and wishing you well always..
Date: 5/5/2024 5:17:00 PM
I can't even begin to imagine the pain from a broken/fractured pelvis. The patience one must develop day in and day out. Sending you healing thoughts and prayers....hugs & blessings, Sara
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/11/2024 2:12:00 PM
A lot of the female Israeli hostages taken by Hammas were raped so much that their pelvis's were broken and then shot. It was so inhumane and horrific. My heart goes out to those young women and their poor grieving families. However, I am not happy with Netanyahu's current actions and pray that we can get the remaining hostages back.
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/6/2024 3:56:00 AM
Hi Sara, I have a good friend at present visiting me from out of state. It's nice to have companionship during this tedious and painful healing. Blessings to you in Texas
Date: 5/5/2024 11:55:00 AM
Sorry for your fall. I hadn't realized this was a recent event that occurred to you
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 5/6/2024 3:57:00 AM
Hi Hilda, I am sorry if this offended you as it was a vague attempt at humor by a female who sustained a recent fall. I am a female though for sure..

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