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A lot of money is spent in restoring religious beliefs or political boundaries. But the world ignores this flesh trade often forced on youngsters taken from homes. Gandhi's birthday is a national holiday when people make high moral speeches but it does nothing to lessen this evil! Hypocrisy at its worst.

there is a brothel there down the street, built like a palace three stories high, hear anklets jingle on dancing feet, with singing and drums as you pass by. I have chanced within once as a youth, to savour pleasures of sinful flesh, in wine and smoke did not see the truth, the tormented souls trapped in evil mesh. pretty they who were plying their trade, vibrant bodies in their early teens, stained glass windows, moroccan lamp shades a sale of bodies for living means! men of wealth leaning on cushioned seats, aged lustful men aim for a score, clapping and rejoicing with the beats, toss money up asking for encore! men of high repute frequented the halls, those who spoke morals and values too, even priests, scholars bought at these stalls, of suffering they caused, had no clue! girls were from different parts of state, some sold through poverty by their own, some stolen from home or lost to fate, some orphaned young, some reasons unknown! here was a trade all chose to ignore, law makers, elite just let it go, each year the numbers grew even more, bodies sold, though their young hearts cried ‘No’! religion morals preached everywhere, man’s hypocrisy in full display, parents showed their own children love, care, suffering of these girls none would say! late one autumn I stopped to enquire, found doors locked, no lights, no sound, no sway, said one “come morrow, if you desire, Brothel is closed for Gandhi’s birthday!
4th placement in Premium contest written 13/02/2021 They closed the brothel contest Kai Michael Neumann Sponsored 9 syllables each line 7 stanzas! abab.... rhyme

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Date: 4/1/2021 3:47:00 PM
I loved that it closed, I hope those girls are returned home in one piece. Great write.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/1/2021 7:55:00 PM
Thanks Nora! wish there is a law that protects them! There is not.
Date: 3/7/2021 4:57:00 AM
I am so glad Gandhi was born, I admired that man and still do. nicely done, Congrats on your win Krish.
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Date: 3/7/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thanks Mystic! Me too. I revere him despite all the wrong things said about him!
Date: 3/5/2021 7:17:00 PM
Hello Krish, A truly fine submission and write, worthy of much reflection. Your final 2 lines are a superb historical allusion, as Gandhi felt lust in his heart and sought to control its surge. So well done. Congratulations. Brian
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Date: 3/7/2021 5:14:00 AM
Thanks Brian. You have hit the nail on the head. So pleased with your visit and wise words!
Date: 3/5/2021 10:12:00 AM
- So many sad fates behind these doors, Krish - Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2021 12:27:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise! Indeed. one of the greatest sadness of our lives!
Date: 3/5/2021 7:20:00 AM
Great write Krish. Nice ending. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Linda! Much appreciate your words!
Date: 3/5/2021 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations Krish on your winning placement, excellent ironic twist at the end, closed for Gandhi’s birthday, but in all seriousness it is a nightmarish trade for anyone to be forced into, cheers David
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thanks David! Indeed man’s most evil side! exploitation of another person for personal gains!
Date: 3/5/2021 4:51:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you!
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Date: 3/5/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thanks Seeker! Pleased it was liked.
Date: 2/19/2021 12:30:00 PM
A sad, sad state of affairs, which you've highlighted brilliantly, Krish. Penetrating ink, my friend. :) gw
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Date: 2/19/2021 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! Indeed a sad state of affairs the world over! wish this can be stopped!! Thanks for your supportive worda.
Date: 2/14/2021 2:34:00 AM
Wonderful entry, friend. God bless you always. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/14/2021 2:42:00 AM
Thanks Gina! Appreciate your read and good wishes!
Date: 2/13/2021 6:42:00 PM
What an outstanding poem, Krish! All the best for the contest! This one will be difficult to beat!
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Date: 2/13/2021 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Seeker! Thanks for your supportive words!

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