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They Are the Sun

They are the sun-- Hurting you with but a look-- Bewitching as the red rays of the morning dawn. With only a glance Cupid is your victor-- Many times the better of even the mighty Zeus-- Alas so painful is their beauty... So hypnotizing... They are a slayer of men and women alike. For so powerful be their attraction that like the Sirens of old To linger upon would be thy doom-- A gift from the gods...a gift of Aphrodite... And a curse of Fantasia, Gigantomastia 10/23/'13 Gigantomastia: They are the sun

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 12:01:00 AM

don't understand this one.... you need to add some flow in here... especially, cause you are talking about beauty and Gods... don't know where the hurt comes in... anyways... i think you should remove the second line... you don't need it.... laterz...PD

Gabe Shelly
Date: 11/6/2013 5:06:00 PM

Need to look up the term gigantomastia, but I still appreciate the criticism, gabe.