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They Always Say They Love You

Laying in the bath last night I thought of my past, A previous relationship that did not really last, Told me she loved me with all her will and mind, As she told others the same lines of the same kind. I dug in her purse and found dirty pictures and a note, All the things she said to me were not unique or remote... So take my advice they claim you are the love of my life, Dig around further you might find that dagger or that knife....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/15/2011 10:21:00 AM
thankxx for all your comments on my poetry mourning mist..every one very appreciated and welcome... luv is a very overused and loosely used word.. the connotation of its deep meaning has gotten lost somewhere .. the feeling of luv surely still exists but its impact has toppled.. enjoyed your write on luv..my favorite subject ..
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