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These Old Hands

These old hands- The hands that once played the golden threads of country music- are now scored by years of performing- The wrinkles on my face are the writings of a broken man- Deep lines- carved on my skin by age- an emptiness rests in the far-reaching solitude of my soul- All that I wrote is etched on my heart- like an over flowing river- In my eyes-tears drafted their revelations- and imprinted their most profound thoughts- Rosarys of lonlinss- I did not pray for this- Desperate thread- my heart did not twist it- Two tears Two sad eyes in shadow- But through them I finely saw a rose in these old hands-California Blue

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Date: 10/18/2016 11:07:00 PM
GORDON, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/14/2016 7:17:00 AM
Oh, just beautiful. Thanks
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Date: 10/10/2016 10:22:00 PM
Johnny Cash and Grandma's Hand's by Bill Withers came to mind reading this. Effective poetry.
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Date: 10/9/2016 12:37:00 PM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath......
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:46:00 PM
WOW, Gordon, I love this poem,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/8/2016 3:03:00 PM
i Enjoyed reading your poem today. Each verse captivates the truth of it's meaing. Keep writing these wonderful poems.
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