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These Lips Would Splutter

. If I had no pen or slip if face to face you did me see my legs would tremble and these lips would splutter So while you my princess sleep far off from my own my address gate I cheerfully with the gleam with promises and kissing dreams dressing and undressing thee I with this pen and slip can be your forever loving humble prince

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/16/2009 9:16:00 PM
The way you use periodic language to match the subject of the write brings authenticity to the page ... a shine of genius here again ... romantic courtier.
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Date: 6/7/2009 1:23:00 PM
Romance is alive and well on the soup !! :) Love this! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/6/2009 5:15:00 PM
well deserved tribute caroline wrote for you my dear friend,and so is she---charma
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:58:00 PM
this have to go to my favs cos this is a beauty-a gem -a humble prince--its very special to have a prince who is not a snob and humble-and the lady having this humble prince'heart is very lucky--awesome--romantically loving and sweet--charma
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Date: 6/4/2009 5:34:00 PM
Oh, James, this is so loving it brings tears to my eyes. Wish I had someone as sensitive as you in my life. You are an inspiration to me, even though we've never met. Love, Carolyn
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