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These Immortal Words

Its late March and spring has wafted in, and we await a rebirth of that distant love... we wished had, somehow, blossomed in us to allow a fiery passion overwhelm us as darkness kicked in. From that memorable day, our young faces shone: we foresaw a happy future, if only destiny had been kinder and granted us that desire before it was gone... why did we vainly wait for moments so impossible and divine? Within this diary's small pages, I seal with deep regret these immortal words that have become us instead... we who weren't afraid of confessing to whomever read them and understood the obstacles we had encountered. It's late evening and raindrops erase the vision that enchanted me, and easily stirred by a sad emotion I recall our wounded vanity... we shouldn't have let distance destroy our dream, the dream of being together; now, all that's left are these immortal words that other lovers should remember. Written by Andrew Crisci for Constance's contest, " The Diary "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2011 1:05:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your well deserved win in this contest with this poignant and beautifully worded poetry.Best wishes ,Gautami
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:00:00 PM
So profoundly tender with the pain of regret. Wonderful, sensational writing, Andrew. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie PS. Top-notch win in my book.
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Date: 4/18/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Andrew
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:24:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in The Diary contest with this superb entry my friend.. amazing .. expressive ..impressive luv..enjoy another top ten victory ..
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrew in Constance La France's contest "The Dairy". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:05:00 PM
soup mail, in a moment~~
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