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These Hands

Aching hands, aged and scarred Wrinkled, arthritic with callouses so hard Knuckles swollen from times being broken Now weathered and weak, quite painful to open In days of youth, they used to pick flowers From weeds in fields in warm summer showers An offering for mother, to make her smile Attempt to gain favor, a precocious child They worked in the garden, cleaned game and fish Chores of all kinds, when needed made fists Championed me well at work and play Pointed to heaven as I clasped them to pray Held hands with young girls, pleasured some ladies Which got me in trouble, then diapered some babies Efficiently used for support and guidance Tender for comfort and firm for defiance Broken bread with many, friends and foes Preachers, teachers even girlfriends ex beaux Never failing me once, whatever the use That is until now with this damn bottle of juice an original poem from the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Date: 7/12/2017 6:28:00 PM
Thanks for leading me to your poems just my speed. My thoughts on the topic: Aging bodies are depressing; but as a result, it's less tragic when we exit them. I comfort myself with, "if HIS physical world is this how phenomenal, the yonder one, HE created, might be even more so."
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/12/2017 6:38:00 PM
I hope it made you smile:) Thank you, Hannah, for reading and commenting.
Date: 2/9/2016 7:02:00 PM
this is such a powerful and poignant poem, daniel, so i was totally surprised and delighted by the humorous ending. great job!
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Date: 2/9/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, Irene. I'm glad I made you smile, that was my reward:)
Date: 2/9/2016 5:48:00 PM
oh I really like this. Love how you took an ordinary topic and made it extraordinary. Write on.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2016 5:57:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You should know me by now, I hope it made you smile. I appreciate your kind words and your time:) Peace
Date: 2/9/2016 4:14:00 PM
The twist at the end got me. Our hands have gone through so much. They can be gentle as the wind or as rough as the sea.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2016 4:30:00 PM
I hope you weren't disappointed. I tend to think humor makes one live longer. Sometimes I write serious stuff but today I was feeling light. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I hope it made you smile:) Peace
Date: 2/9/2016 2:21:00 PM
This should be a song Daniel. It's beautiful.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2016 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kelli for the flowers. I hope it made you smile:) Peace
Date: 2/9/2016 12:23:00 PM
lol Daniel... you have a great sense of humor. I have no trouble seeing you as a precocious child. Well done.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Lin. I can write serious poetry if I want to but I would rather make people smile. I appreciate your kindness and your time and I made you smile again:)
Date: 2/9/2016 12:02:00 PM
What a warm and witty write!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/9/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thank you, Dineen for taking the time to read and comment. I hope it made you smile:)

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