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These Hands

Once these twisted hands were shapely And were busy every day In the molding of three children As a sculptor shapes his clay. These hands were always busy With the tasks they had to do In the raising of a family And in service Lord, to you. These old hands still have the power To write poetry to share And to model for a grandchild How to fold his hands in prayer. Loving hands with age defiled Can still soothe a sobbing child.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 2:40:00 PM
congratulations, Joyce. It is a great little poem. I wish I had thought to be so clever and just write about hands like this! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "The Power in Your Hands". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:43:00 PM
Great win and congrats on your success.. Michael
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:04:00 PM
Many congratulations Joyce on your win with this delightful poem in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:08:00 AM
I teared up Joyce, when I saw this beautiful write, retrospection of blessings past and a blession still. Count them all blessing, My Dear, for that is love's intention. Congratulations on a worthy poem presentation's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:07:00 AM
You gave a unique spin on "The Power in our Hands," Joyce. Well done! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:19:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Joyce and good luck in the contest... I had five sons... one passed at 5 months old... they are grown in their 20's now ..I started at 17 right out of high school as the poem I entered begins... the flow of rhyme sound better with adding two more sons..haha.. good luck in this new contest.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:10:00 PM
What an amazing way to capture love and enlightenment!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:07:00 AM
Wow Great write Joyce.....Larry
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Date: 6/18/2010 12:35:00 AM
absolutely mesmerizing work.. it makes one believe and want to love... thank you for sharing this..
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