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These Eyes

Despite your transcendental airs, No windowed soul invites your gaze. These eyes have steered a thousand stares, Through labyrinths of smoke and haze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/1/2016 7:25:00 PM
wow, DAvid. I just love reading your poems and it was a real treat finding this one from that winners list a few weeks back. Congrats.
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Date: 9/23/2016 10:25:00 PM
What is transcendental is so beautiful...Well done! :)
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Date: 9/23/2016 10:56:00 AM
beautiful david..congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:04:00 AM
Well done, David! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:42:00 AM
Good stuff. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:19:00 AM
You are so good at these kinds of little poems, David. A well deserved win. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/22/2015 4:33:00 PM
:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:41:00 PM
David, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:41:00 PM
Beautifully expressed, especially the second part of this poem. #7 Congratulations on a top podium finish, David. // paul
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Date: 6/22/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hi David: very profound! Good Write. Congrtulations!
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:16:00 AM
well portrayed David congrats on win hugs
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Date: 6/21/2015 8:48:00 PM
magnificent, congrats on your win
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:18:00 PM
deep and beautiful many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/15/2015 1:53:00 AM
David, that is deep
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