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These Days

Like most we wandered and wavered and fell for the Devil's wily ways But not on these days On these days all sins were forgiven Curses dissolved into blessings Tension melted in the glow of good will Evil evaporated in the light of truth Grief fell victim to delight Death succumbed to life... Sipping On Eggnog spiked with Rum Hugging our sons and our daughters Gently scolding wayward grandchildren Slapping old friends on the back Bragging and telling tall tales Laughing hysterically at our lies... On these days there were no missing pieces On these days the wounded world was healed On these blessed and blissful days it all made sense... Christmas Eve and Christmas Day - 2009 *This is re-titled, edited and extended version of a previous post adapted for the 'Days' contest sponsored by Thomas Martin

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Date: 5/3/2015 9:28:00 PM
Tim, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:58:00 PM
TIM, Awesome WIN.... CONGRATS luv ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:09:00 PM
great uplifting write Tim - many congrats :-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 2/1/2015 3:33:00 AM
A wonderful poem Tim. Blessings. Congrats on win>love rajat
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Date: 1/31/2015 3:29:00 PM
Great winning spiritually based work..Congrats..!!! : > ) Sara
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Date: 1/31/2015 3:10:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on this beautiful spiritual write. 7 Eve
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:12:00 AM
Congrats on the win with is lovely poem,
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Date: 1/31/2015 2:04:00 AM
Hello Tim, today you are a 1st place winner. Highly favored this poem is. I congratulate you and be glad in it! Verlena
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Date: 12/12/2013 7:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your win cher!
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Date: 12/12/2013 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations Tim xx
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Date: 12/11/2013 11:46:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Tim
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Date: 12/11/2013 11:10:00 PM
nice win, Tim...pd
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Date: 12/9/2012 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Tim :) cheers!!! :)
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:48:00 AM
congrats Tim on a magnificent write and win for fond memories luv ..
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Date: 12/8/2012 5:50:00 AM
Big Congratulations Tim , love this xx
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:47:00 PM
I SURE remember this one. So profound. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:34:00 PM
Wonderful write, Tim! I love this optimistic perspective. I especially love the line "curses dissolved into blessings." Congrats on an awesome win!
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Date: 12/7/2012 8:59:00 PM
Tim,,, another wonderful win..pd
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:34:00 PM
So uplifting and so true the best thing about the Christmas season is the extention of peace and forgiveness if only for a short while. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:55:00 PM
a very interesting one and very different too! I can't think which contest it would be meant for. It should do really well though. GREAT poem.
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