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These Arms Long To Hold You

Sensuous allures float in pulchritude of white swan Upon your lotus pond, arousing visions of romance As I see you there where pink blossoms dance And kiss your presence in ambiance of golden dawn. Nary a cloud foreshadows my blue sky of tomorrow As primrose emotions evoke blossoms of meadows; In emerald green terrain, there are no dark shadows For memories of yesteryear bear no hints of sorrow. You entice ruby moods applauding crimson hues Cheering for our love in chrysanthemum flowers, Bright red tulips, soft pink roses, and spring rain showers As ode of desires muses love-verses you schmooze. And you sparkle gemstones from prisms of tinted dew Igniting passions within whiffs of scented breeze Caressing my wishes in embrace of seductive tease, Instinctively aware: how these arms long to hold you! September 24, 2019 Placed 1st: Pick a title, vol. 9-enclosed rhyme poetry contest Title chosen: These arms long to hold you Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Placed 3rd: Strand 660 contest by Brian Strand

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/15/2019 7:34:00 AM

your pen sparkles in the dewdrops in this very beautifully painted piece vijay i pray you have a blessed beautiful week

Hello There

Date: 10/4/2019 9:58:00 AM

Oh so deserving... Congratulations, Vijay <3

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2019 4:35:00 PM

So kind of you, HT..many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/3/2019 6:33:00 PM

I knew this one would be a top winner, congratulations Vijay on your first place win :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/5/2019 4:35:00 PM

Much appreciate my friend..many thanks.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/27/2019 8:21:00 PM

Wow, highly romantic passion you've penned with this piece; a smooth, enjoyable read.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2019 8:09:00 AM

Much appreciate MLK--many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/27/2019 7:45:00 AM

Another lovely piece smoothly blending romance with nature, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Hello There

Date: 9/26/2019 3:35:00 PM

A beauty, Vijay ~ Delicious!! (if you don't mind my saying) Decadent, too ~ Loved this ~ a fave :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2019 5:16:00 PM

So kind of you HT--much appreciate your thoughts..many thanks. A special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2019 6:05:00 PM

wow, you really adorned your lines with beautiful detail. I love that title line of all the ones we were given, but kept mine only one verse. This is sure to please the judge!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2019 6:57:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea..yes--I liked that title line as well. You accomplished much in your stanza--that is the power of brevity.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/24/2019 10:31:00 PM

Oh my!!! One could fall in love with words such as these. Longing is evident, and that sweet ache to be held. The flowers blush. :) As do I. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. A favorite for me. "Caressing my wishes in embrace of seductive tease" Indeed. Simply breathtaking Vijay. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:28:00 AM

Nobody knows romantic verses better than you my friend..glad you liked the poem..I am always happy to read your comments..many thanks, Brandy. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2019 1:15:00 PM

The beauty within this poem is exquisite dear Vijay, the flowers, the colours, desire and longing penned in flowing poetic verses "The arms long to hold you" - enchanting. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:25:00 AM

So glad to read your words of approval..so glad you liked the poem, Jennifer..you are always very kind..many many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/24/2019 11:38:00 AM

such a beautiful romantic piece flowing through your ink, elegantly written...best of luck in the contest, i am sure it will score big :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:23:00 AM

Many thanks for the vote of confidence, Sandy--means a lot coming from a talented poetess..much appreciate.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2019 11:28:00 AM

Wow! This is a winner Vijay! I love the primrose line, but also all the flowers you included. This is a beauty :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:22:00 AM

So glad you liked it Heidi..much appreciate your supportive comments, as always..many thanks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/24/2019 10:23:00 AM

Poetic artistry at play in your write... Romance of hearts...Nice one

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:21:00 AM

Many thanks, as always, my friend for your visit and comments--much appreciate, Arturo.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/24/2019 8:44:00 AM

This is lovely Vijay. It read to me of someone in love with a wood nymph. Like a lovely fantasy. Great imagery. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:20:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Judy..many thanks for your visit and comments..much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/24/2019 8:16:00 AM

You are the master of romance Vijay, Another gem from your pen. Good luck. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:19:00 AM

So glad to hear that from a master poet..much appreciate Tom..many thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/24/2019 8:05:00 AM

You are so good at these romantic writes. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Rick.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2019 8:18:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Richard--many thanks.