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These Arms a Lighthouse

When the brief sounds of barking dogs fade and the loud voices of children echo away When winds stop shaking apple trees and leaves settle in the lake When the sweat of a tangerine sun sets across shallow waters ,and songbirds flutter far It is then , when the soft touch of silence falls upon my bed It is there ,when my thoughts and I lay wide awake . Unstill ! It is then , when I travel places up the rocky hill My thoughts tread like jasmines once blown on the sand My eyes seek in distance for a seaman 's return. Another dawn breaks without vessels and sails Another night follows without his embrace Anothet year passes on the edge of the land These arms still a lighthouse , with a flickering lamp.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/31/2015 12:55:00 PM
everything about this is on point....the setting, the imagery, how the scenes disjoint....your talent is real, and your heart is true....I am eric and I am glad I found you....;)
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed rereading this beauty Charmaine.
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Date: 7/29/2015 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic work, love the last line! Nice write Charmaine!
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:28:00 PM
Very beautiful....the title enough would have drawn me in, but your words....your words, beautiful woman, are a reflection of your beautiful soul. Welcome back....Hugs
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:40:00 PM
Agreed! Beautiful, Char!
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Date: 7/27/2015 8:44:00 AM
nostalgic breath of a piece so impeccably composed, charms.. nice to read you again.. huggs
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Date: 7/27/2015 2:07:00 AM
Elegant, melancholy, graceful, and beautiful. What a gift you've given with this one. I wish I could pull off half the sweetness and eloquence found here. Easy 10, but you'll have to settle for 7.
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:16:00 AM
"a flickering lamp" is enough to keep the memory alive. Deep down you know that no seaman will return, but a lovely romantic relationship can never be erased. As usual, the imagery plays a major role; an emotional offering that comes with all the right ingredients. // paul
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Date: 7/25/2015 8:37:00 AM
This is so moving Charmaine. I love the images you have written so eloquently here.
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Date: 7/25/2015 5:35:00 AM
This was so mesmerizing... Expressions vividly formed through intense and passionate emotions.. Such a treat to read Charmaine. Always, Laura
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Date: 7/17/2015 9:48:00 AM
The metaphors and imagery are perfect. Nice flow of words and a interesting sounding poem with all the right stuff to appeal to our emotions. Emile.
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Date: 7/17/2015 4:35:00 AM
Beautifully narrated….What a lovely song. I fully enjoyed it!
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Date: 7/16/2015 6:30:00 PM
I fear being all alone once all the kids are grown and gone. Beautiful song Charmaine. Hopefully the winds will blow his ship your way...lovely Tim
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Date: 7/17/2015 1:21:00 AM
Kids will give you nephews and nieces and you'll die old ,blessed and happy.Actually I dont believe in death..So you journey and take an upgrade is more eloquent : ).Thanks for reading !

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