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There You Are Again

There you are again, showing up unexpectedly, in what I see. Taking my mind on a trip like a screaming train. As the whistle of truth echoing, is still left unheard. Rumblings on the tracks, shaking cars, about to derail. But, it keeps on going and the changing scenes replay. Like pages of a book, flipping by, in the same old story. Shown on signs trapped in a long tunnel of darkness, With only a glimmer of light still flickering ahead. Will light be reached this time, to remain the end of the story? But, with you standing there laughing, mocking, one step ahead? Flashes of mixed images young and old are seen in corners. Time that turned your innocence into something unrecognizable. A powerless train ride, with old tears dripping on cement walls. All the while, you rise to the top of a hierarchy of power. As if your childhood was erased and now facts non-existent. Interestingly, you are the most factual person of them all. But, you have cherry picked the new facts to fit your motives. I have seen others take your ride to a tragic, abrupt train wreck - Others that I could not save - Heidi Sands 11/21/19

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Date: 11/22/2019 5:15:00 AM
I love this.. reminds me of people I've known along the way... Love it, Bless you, Gina
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/22/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Regina. I appreciate your comment and feedback :)
Date: 11/21/2019 8:06:00 PM
wow powerful ride of emotions in this one, the reader can definitely feel this piece like a train derailment, the force is great...well penned!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2019 9:12:00 PM
Thank you very much. I am happy to see your positive feedback :)
Date: 11/21/2019 12:58:00 PM
This is so powerful, strong, angry. Understandably. This is so well written Heidi. I feel as though I am witnessing this train ride, about to derail. This descriptive theme for the situation is a perfect choice. A fav for me!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2019 1:19:00 PM
Sandy, you are always kind and consistently supportive of me. I am grateful. Thank you for your comment and considering this a Fav! :)
Date: 11/21/2019 12:50:00 PM
Intense, and filled with soul and energy. I FAV this one, Heidi. Pangiota. Well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment Panagiota. I appreciate you considering this a FAV. :)
Date: 11/21/2019 12:32:00 PM
Whoa my friend, this was strong, almost angry. I could hear this as I read it and it was quite loud and definitely gets the point across.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2019 1:18:00 PM
Hi Chris. Yes, a mixture of emotions that come into our lives. I discovered something new, unexpectedly and there it was. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 11/21/2019 9:31:00 AM
WOW! This is powerful Heidi--I felt the intensity of emotions in your write--in words of captivating imagery. The ending line is equally powerful.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/21/2019 9:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay! :)

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