There Once Was a Nurse

There once was a nurse called Seren Who suddenly got pecked by a Heron With her bag she did clout And everything fell out Now poor Seren shares her lipstick with a heron © 29/12/2012~GG~

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Painted Hunter

Date: 3/5/2013 1:52:00 PM

hehe...I love a good limerick

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/31/2012 5:28:00 PM

lol Mandy, you bugger you.....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 1/1/2013 3:30:00 AM

ha ha lo xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/31/2012 10:55:00 AM

nice little dedication here, in a limerick oh boy...

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/30/2012 11:23:00 PM

Poor Seren! But it doesn't look like the heron is bothered. Well penned Mandy!

Rollo West

Date: 12/30/2012 5:52:00 PM

Hi Mandy, really liked this, got a big laugh out of it. Rollo

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/30/2012 4:26:00 AM

dear angel GG .. very creative work... so lovely..enjoyed ...wishing you have a Happy new Year ..all the best <3<3<3