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There Left Uncertain Time

Of course there is time and no need to hurry For young men whose hands are strong And hearts do nothing wrong. But Death is an inherited burden Our strong shoulders cannot carry. we meet death in strange streets and sometimes it nods away but in some other, it leads our way. I hate not death more But still not love life less. I fear not its coming But do not fancy it’s never coming at all. And if you say with critic’s eye That I subconsciously want never to die I must reply with utmost care ‘yes, indeed sir, not while I’m young’.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/16/2016 12:05:00 PM
Vidya, Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:24:00 PM
Vidhya, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/13/2016 3:30:00 PM
Interesting First post, vidhya chandhran,Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
Timeless subject! Glad I stopped by to read your work. Hope you enjoy soup. The site is very user-friendly. Welcome!
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Vidhya Chandhran
Date: 9/13/2016 2:56:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and i hope i will have a great time here.

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