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There Is No Other

Your industrial face carries the pain of waiting; but it never came. Your flesh pitted with the scars of wanting; but it never came. Your heart heavy with the sorrow of trying; but it never came. Your voice faint with the force of praying; but it never came. Your eyes pale with the sea of tears; but it never came. Your hands drip sweat with the worry; but it never came. Your soul cries out from the frustration; but it never came. For you, it was never meant to be; It never came! © 19/7/2014

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Date: 7/22/2015 12:08:00 PM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:40:00 PM
btw, my favorite line here would be that one about the "Your eyes pale with the sea of tears" -- so many others I really like here...
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:38:00 PM
Sighs, sometimes all it seems that all we do is wait-- a very intriguing verse that also makes me wonder-- so nice to hear from you David! Sending you warmest Merry Christmas greetings! And thank you for passing by-- have a wonderful and blessed Christmas! God bless you and your family!
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:20:00 PM
hey just came across a guy I first mistook for you because his name is Dave williams. sure wish YOU were into Soup and leaving lots of poems here again.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:20:00 AM
I wish you could come back and write some more.. This was sad but so wonderfully said.
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:24:00 PM
Have that element of waiting in vane David.. thought provoking gem. You have me thinking this morning ;)
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Date: 8/14/2014 11:14:00 AM
David...A gem Thought provoking Sometimes, disappointment is a blessing! Great work! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 8/7/2014 4:55:00 PM
A really heartfelt poem.
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Date: 8/6/2014 11:15:00 AM
david, you got me thinking and feeling.. so emotive and well expressed!.. huggs
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:45:00 PM
You gave the audience a peak into your heart for a brief moment and then shut the door before we could find out the rest of the story...please write a second stanza, David....Oh, and by the way!!! HELLLLLOOOOO HOW ARE YOU??? OH FRIEND ACROSS THE POND? HOPE ALL IS WELL. TOOK A BREAK FROM WRITING TO SPEND TIME WITH FAMILY AND SEEK QUIET TIME WITH MY LORD. :) Sending blessings to you and yours!
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Date: 8/3/2014 6:38:00 PM
A very well written poem. Some things are not meant to be. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 8/1/2014 10:18:00 AM
A well-structured poem depicting a high measure of creativity.
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Date: 7/31/2014 5:42:00 PM
This poem is a puzzle? [maybe it's good it never came?] Just put up a new one Masked at Midnight ooooh scary! You try BLITZ! L & L
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Date: 7/29/2014 4:57:00 PM
Hey Bro, a very sad write. Sometimes absolution eludes us and you captured that essence here. Hugs
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:03:00 PM
Hey David. Just wanted to stop in and say hi, as I've been away for a while. I hope you and your family are happy and healthy. This poem hits pretty hard, David. I had to read it twice, but I think I understand the depth of it now...though its hard to put into words...
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Date: 7/29/2014 3:18:00 AM
This anaphora form has added depth of feeling to every line David. The human condition leaves so many in pain. A very soulful write my friend. How are you doing?
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Date: 7/27/2014 10:49:00 AM
Oh at last quality poetry, love this David,,i believe this is related more to the human aspect, then material, but what ever, inspiring at best
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:26:00 AM
Harry you are spot on my friend....
Date: 7/26/2014 1:22:00 PM
this one is very intriguing and makes the reader want to know who it might be and what happened to this poor soul. Is this for the SAd poem contest? It seems that it is for someone very real.
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:06:00 AM
It felt to me like the volume and stress level increased with each line, David. Very effective crafting of this poem. Enjoyed it my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 7/24/2014 4:01:00 AM
Poem is a lot different from what I expected by seeing at the title..It's great piece of work David..Have a good day!
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Date: 7/23/2014 9:13:00 PM
Repeating lines are great fun. Very effective my friend. Your write shows you have it down pat and max it for effect. Decades ago I wrote many poems using that technique. I love the very high level you have taken it too! BBBBravooooo!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/23/2014 7:56:00 AM
I didn't expect this from the title at all. A nice read, well done.
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Date: 7/21/2014 12:08:00 PM
Dave...I must admit. I did read this as soon as you posted it, but I was so stumped by your first line...Your industrial face....I wish you would explain. It is a great poem, but it has such a sad ending. Must all waiting come to nothing? Hugs
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Date: 7/20/2014 8:49:00 PM
Hi David, Dave said it better than I, loved this poem! I hope you are doing ok and in good health!!
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