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There Is a Softness

there's a softness in your eyes a gentle knowing of my inner world which is your universe there is tenderness in your caress a healing balm for the roughness of my soul which is the fabric of your life There is a longing in your sigh a calm reassurance that my body provides all you need to stay alive there is sweetness to your kiss a gift of taste to erase all the bitterness in me which is your sacred offering there is a passion in your heart that plays out in your body as it entwines with mine making our moments divine Yes, there is all this and more embodied in your smile an ecapsulation of perfect love which is the core of my existence Eileen Manassian

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Date: 5/16/2016 11:47:00 PM
So glad to see you found your muse yet again, Eileen. You wrote out these beautiful feelings so effortlessly ... probably because what you got is something real. A lovely title, too ...
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Date: 5/15/2016 4:20:00 PM
This is very beautiful, why maybe one day someone will even say these words to me! so sweet! :)
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:11:00 AM
Dropping by with a hug. I enjoyed reading this one again.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/14/2016 10:30:00 AM
Hope you've written something new....swinging by to check and to return the hug. :)
Date: 5/13/2016 12:18:00 PM
Excellent...the title amply reflects what this poem stands for...serene and contended love. This reminds me of the sea when peaceful and calm; I've also seen the other side of you, the sea churning with passionate waves...Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/14/2016 10:29:00 AM
I am given to extremes...as well you know, dear. I was glad to touch on the softer side of love. Thank you for your sweet visit, Paul. Hope all is well.
Date: 5/13/2016 8:11:00 AM
This has such a sweet calming effect, it is truly lovely Eileen. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/14/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. :) I'm glad you liked it. My husband is in Canada at the moment...and here...am I! :( He is visiting his brother in Abbostford. Since won't get to go to the wedding in June...he decided to go there now while he is in the States. I'm gutted...to say the least. Seeing the pics just makes me go mad. Anyway....I'm sure someday...it will happen. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2016 7:11:00 PM
Eileen, such fluid beauty in your delivery...seems so effortless to express a healthy relationship in such vivid images...stanza 4 in particular, stands out for me, the gift of love can heal...great poem!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2016 10:47:00 PM
Yes, Jimbo. Healing....is so sweet and precious when it comes. Thank you for your kind visit. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. Did you call in to Drake's show? I didn't this time. I've been in a bit of a fog lately. I'm glad this poem came to me and that I was able to capture the thoughts. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2016 4:45:00 PM
"There is a Softness" in your spirit to compose a write such as this! :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2016 10:45:00 PM
Thank you, Walter. I can at times be fierce. You might want to read my poem, Warrior Princess. I can at times be gentle. It all depends on time and circumstance. We are multifaceted human beings...and this shows with the act of love as well. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 5/12/2016 4:38:00 PM
It is always helpful to have someone that cares unconditionally for you. Very lovely Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2016 10:43:00 PM
That type of love is beautiful to experience, Tim. It's what we love to write about. Blessings.
Date: 5/12/2016 3:57:00 PM
just beautiful! i love this one, eileen...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thank you...Ilene. I wanted to linger on tenderness for a while. The beautiful oneness that comes with being sacrificial in love. I'm glad you enjoyed this gentler writer. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2016 2:38:00 PM
So so beautiful sweet Eileen.Glad to see you posting.Btw..Thanks for what you did for me yesterday dear...Big hugs.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2016 3:26:00 PM
You know I love you. Some difficulties in my life at the moment, but you are tucked away in my heart...

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