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There Is a Fence In My Bed

A 38th parallel separates our pillows I try to touch her and she bellows We are like strangers in our own bed Help me break the Berlin wall in my bed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/14/2014 7:08:00 PM
The day you break the wall in your head, you can strengthen both of your's thread and things will never occur as you said. - joy
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John Pen
Date: 7/2/2014 1:34:00 AM
I bet the wall will come down one day
Date: 5/20/2014 10:26:00 AM
Well written piece on a sensitive and common dilemma Xx~Xx
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John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 12:59:00 AM
Thanks Kim
Date: 5/16/2014 5:42:00 AM
Oh.... this is a very sad write. I hope that wall comes down soon!
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John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 5/16/2014 4:37:00 AM
We broke the Berlin Wall,keep on try.
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John Pen
Date: 6/12/2014 1:04:00 AM
I sure will. Thanks for taking time to read my piece

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