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Then My Love

Then my love for you became passion We hardly knew each other....... Then, Eye to eye and palpitations, Oh ..... My! Whether did I construe our ...... Love ? As stronger grew this longing ...... For, And wanting to hear back from ...... You, Days passed, colder the nights ....... Became, As I lay desperate and frigid in ...... Passion ! Written August 6th, 2015 For contest "End line words" by HGarvey Awarded 11th place

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/16/2015 1:16:00 AM

It is amazing how quickly love can grow between two people who just met... A very nice poem, Dr. Upma. You've done well with this difficult form. Congrats on the win!

James Inman

Date: 11/12/2015 11:13:00 AM

Very nice write. Interesting last line, I like "frigid in passion"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2015 7:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem and win and thank you for your many kind comments. Love, Joyce

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/7/2015 1:41:00 PM

Wonderfully done, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Michael Tor

Date: 11/5/2015 2:58:00 PM

What a passionate write Dr. Your heart rate increases in reading this one. A deserving win!!! Congratulations!

Skat A

Date: 11/5/2015 12:18:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2015 11:59:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning!Congrats!!Sara

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/4/2015 2:50:00 PM

Whew hew! Congrats Dr. :)

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/4/2015 12:30:00 PM

A n ascendence to love! Congrats Upma

Paul Callus

Date: 11/4/2015 12:13:00 PM

From friendship love and passion came forth, Upma! Love your end line! ~ Congratulations on this fine win! Regards // paul

Anu Nayak

Date: 8/6/2015 11:19:00 AM

Beautiful poem with intense passion in it Nice!!! ...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2015 11:42:00 AM

Thnx Anu !

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/6/2015 10:01:00 AM

Longing that lasts, Dr Upma....True passion lives on...Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2015 11:38:00 AM

Thnx for ur sweet visit dear Eileen !

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/6/2015 9:56:00 AM

Dear Dr. Upma, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Thank-YOU for supporting my contest. Superbly Quilled. Please look at my POEM "After Life - End Line Word - to see the format I would Like to see YOUR POEM written in. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2015 11:31:00 AM

Trust it fits into the suggested format now leige! Thnx for ur visit n words!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/6/2015 8:52:00 AM

I love how you made your title to be your end of line. Very creative. All the best in the contest Dr Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/6/2015 11:42:00 AM

Thnx njeri, so glad u liked!