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Then Fate Took It's Turn

My hero to me, was just a simple man He was ill throughout his life, but he raised two sons Two jobs he held down until he couldn't anymore Then fate took it's turn, and turned his heart sore First was the youngest, on a broken bottle he fell His artery slashed, was the start of his hell I recovered from my trauma, nearly losing my life But my accident increased, his ill health into strife Over the next two years he was hospitalised His sons fostered out, in fatherless cries To children's homes they went, from pillar to post Yearning for the person, who loved them the most He gradually recovered, we became a family again Once again fate took it's turn, returning life's pain On a Monday night back in nineteen sixty nine What every parent dreads, returned him to ill health decline His two boys excited, joining the local Boy's Brigade Running as fast as they could, for time to be made The older was faster, he ran well ahead The younger lagging behind, his little legs so delayed On turning the corner, all I could see Was my older brother, running well ahead of me Without looking left or right, onto the street he ran A split second later, he was hit by a van My life entered slow motion, whilst I witnessed it all To see your brother knocked down, a sibling to fall He was caught under the van and dragged down the street At seven years old, too terrified to greet Over the next six years, his heath gradually became worse He was more in hospital, in illness immersed That's why he is my hero, to my lost brother and me He's the kind of man that I've turned out to be He had no quality of life, but what he gave meant more The love for his two boys all through his life's sores Holding down two jobs through illness and strife Admirable, that's just a word, he gave me my life My entry for Crystal Wilkins contest 'My Hero'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2011 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Crystal's contest "My Hero" James. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your much deserved win in the contest, James. I guess we both saw our fathers as heroes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congrats James on your super big win in the My Hero contest with this astounding write and entry.... enjoy another sweet success for this rare beauty poetry with luv..
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Date: 1/4/2011 11:00:00 PM
Oh James. How beautiful, how sad, how wonderful is this poem of loss and love and life and pain and triumph. You have written a true hero's tribute here. I see why I am drawn to your writing -- you have suffered greatly as a child as well. You have known pain and sacrifice and fear and uncertainty. You have conveyed this so very well in this most excellent write. Well done, sir. Very well done. Love, Deb
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Date: 1/3/2011 9:13:00 AM
Well my dear poetic friend; you have once again, captivated this soul with your depth of love. My heart goes out to you James ! I feel the 'proud' so vibrantly in this write Sir, and its flow made it very enjoyable to read. much love, james
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:10:00 PM
Just a simple man, I think not.. A man who influenced your life in an amazing way. Awesome write, wishing you all the best with this gem.. ;-) ~ Wilma
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Date: 1/1/2011 11:51:00 AM
I read your poem several times and had tears in my eyes, dear James. I KNOW you are a good father to your children as well as a good son and brother to the two souls watching over you from the above. Really impressive and powerful poem. A winner for sure! All the best to you.
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Date: 12/31/2010 11:00:00 AM
Dear Lord, I know this tragic story is true. You painted the images and emotions so vividly and I'm so sorry you had to experience these losses. You could not have picked a better hero or written a more powerful poem! Blessings and love, your fan Carolyn.
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:58:00 PM
brought tears to my eyes James, good luck with this wonderfully emotional piece in the contest
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:40:00 PM
powerful read
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:29:00 PM
A wonderful entry James, i sure enjoyed the tale of this one hero,,, have a wonderful new years.. James.. always.p.d.
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