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Then Came

Sisters and teachers Were once my healers Then through this life's trend Came lovers and actors Who fed me the cake That today and each day I'm just like hay No doubt life's such a rife Written between 2000-2003 Just the young thoughts of the young mind

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Date: 2/27/2015 6:46:00 PM
Hope the cake was moist...
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/28/2015 6:00:00 AM
Lol! one day ill reveal if the cake was moist. So get tuned on my poems, your answer will be coming. Thank you for passing my work, I appreciate your visit a lot
Date: 2/23/2015 7:10:00 PM
Nicely written... :) Rajkumar
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/24/2015 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Rajkumar for your comment:)

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