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Thee Kiss...(Sarah Hales V Sonnet Man Round 2)

A KISS not just any kiss but thee kiss........... First to connect Your lips indulge mine Did 'nt see it just tasted it I can still feel it A kiss that told more than any poet Ecstasy the room turned Pleasure so divine Hands that pulled my ebony ruffled curls As your sensual mouth danced with mine I made love to you that moment All through my soul like ocean waves Desire and fire A flame so high A pulse that could not deny As your heart pounded We grounded ....you and I.... Enclosed in a moment for two A Kiss not just any Kiss but thee kiss..

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/3/2010 4:46:00 PM

I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 7/3/2010 1:35:00 PM

Congrats on being featured this week. Rhonda

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/1/2010 9:30:00 AM

Congrats Sarah on the featured write. Vince

Lawrence Schrank

Date: 6/30/2010 6:05:00 AM

I have known that kiss...thanks for reminding me!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/29/2010 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Sarah. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 6/29/2010 7:40:00 AM

Good way to put it. I like your style. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2010 7:48:00 PM

Congrats Sarah on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great choice to feature and share.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..

Janette Fisher

Date: 6/28/2010 10:17:00 AM

Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette

Louzana Nubani

Date: 6/28/2010 9:52:00 AM

nice poem about ''thee kiss'' :P

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 6/28/2010 9:48:00 AM

Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.

James Fraser

Date: 6/27/2010 1:49:00 AM

The kiss that takes them on a journey, a joy to read >> James

Royal Trevino

Date: 6/21/2010 8:56:00 AM

love it lol "thee kiss", you surely are adding flame to this passionate write =(^.^)=Royal

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/21/2010 8:45:00 AM

This is wonderful. It flows very well. I like the essence of the storyline. It sends touching images about thee kiss. Great job! Joseph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2010 7:58:00 AM

A desirable write, sentuallity at it's best, sweet write...P.D.

Tirzah Conway

Date: 6/20/2010 5:23:00 PM

I think you won this round too-I'm off to read his now!~Tirzah~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/20/2010 2:40:00 PM

Very enticing and passionate, Sarah! But who is "Sonnet Man"? Could it be Michael below? Great poem. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2010 2:38:00 PM

yes Sarah wow, this is forbiden, lol you are going to get Doc. good with this one. He has an awesome one. keep them comming can't wait to see who will win,..p..d

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/20/2010 2:34:00 PM

Wow!!!! Im speachless, and need a cold shower.lol... well done, lovely feeling expressed here.. Michael