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Walking in a luster of brown and gold. Leaves crunch underfoot. Maple syrup and chimney smoke smells a-wafting through the streets. A chilled amber Marzen waits on the yellow window frame. Leaves crunch underfoot. The smell of the pigskin pressed against my nostrils. A chilled amber Marzen waits on the yellow window frame. I watch my wife take a sip, a break from pie-making. The smell of the pigskin pressed against my nostrils. Maple syrup and chimney smoke smells a-wafting through the streets. I watch my wife take a sip, a break from pie-making. Walking in a luster of brown and gold.

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Date: 11/2/2022 12:00:00 AM
So smooth flow. A perfect Pantoum I am charmed. Have Good Days
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Date: 11/1/2022 11:43:00 PM
Hi Matt, This work has an excellent flow, apt imagery, and an intriguing narrative. It never sags and sustains it’s momentum throughout. Please don’t apologise for any would-be delay. These things take time. Heartfelt thanks for the placement of a piece which has a special meaning for me and your compliments. Howard
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:46:00 PM
I love the ambling gait of this. It feels just like an autumn stroll, a little warm, a little cool, a little smooth, a little crunchy. Elizabeth
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