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The Writer In Me, Wants You To Know

Gold or gladiolus or golden sapphire fine; Delighted, even if I divine light define; If, like an orange, the details I do not peel, Will my rhyme-lyric like an angelus-bell, peal? Like a disciplined mother rearing her infant, Timely sleeping, rising, nourishing comprehend; Shaping each brick of my creation if I build, Will my greatest works as unskilled ever get grilled? Is my concept clear as a transparent crystal? Does my thought target, shoot as sure as a pistol? Do my ideas, views flow like fluent rivers? Are my imageries as reflected as mirrors? If I write 'pudding' when I need to write 'wedding' When it necessitates making the amending; If my ego, like a wall, stands strong on the way, I'm not a poet perfect; I should get away. As the wave-sound of the sea both feeble and rough, As the chirping of birds are coarsely sweet enough; As wild animals have roars, gibber, brays, and hums, My words should vary from simple to complex-sums. Is a writer full in him that he should not read? Do the shores of the seas ever a limit need? Voraciousness in keenness make my wisdom vast, The wisest of wisdom should be my true breakfast. 11 August 2021 The Writer In Me, Wants You To Know Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 8/16/2021 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Thanks for sharing all about yourself. Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 8/15/2021 9:55:00 PM
Congratulations!! Very evocative and inspirational!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/16/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/15/2021 11:14:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, A huge Congratulations to you! I really love your poem which expresses deep thoughts, and is crafted with brilliant images as well as exquisite rhyming pattern. You have analyzed the poetic skills with superb understanding. Brilliant write, My Friend. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 8/16/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/15/2021 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. I have picked your poem like a diver picks a pearl from the bottom of the sea. Congratulations from me...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/15/2021 4:47:00 AM
I take this chance to thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to take part in your contests. From the very comment of yours on my poetry the very first time I entered the PS, I have been growing. I cannot forget you for this. I learn from your writings constantly too. They are, indeed, geat.
Date: 8/15/2021 4:20:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/15/2021 4:43:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/14/2021 8:45:00 PM
Delightful write, Chris! Congrats on your win
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/15/2021 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/14/2021 7:47:00 AM
Amazing write... Thoroughly enjoyed reading this beautiful verse... Reads like a winner...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/15/2021 1:15:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/13/2021 3:27:00 AM
Stupendous! Every line, every comparison worthy of top win.
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Date: 8/13/2021 9:25:00 AM
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Date: 8/12/2021 3:15:00 AM
Deep and well thought out, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/12/2021 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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