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The Wrath of a Snake

In the sun you dictate the pace, confining me to thick night; still you are trampling on my tail. Cruel man i kiss your heel. Coyote strolls not in the day, just man wanders not at night. Name:Kayod5 Contest title: Night Creatures Date: 15th Jan,2015 No 2-Rattlesnake.

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Date: 1/26/2015 4:27:00 PM
It is nice to see your poem on the winner's list. Congrats to you, Kayode! Very creative work, my friend!
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:26:00 AM
Interesting work..Yes, the snake has bruised His heel and He will bruise his head..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2015 1:09:00 PM
Just circlying back to offer huge congratulations on your beautiful win! Well done! Pandita.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/23/2015 8:59:00 PM
Hi sweetie,thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
Date: 1/22/2015 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Kayod5 on your win.
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:01:00 PM
Hi Rob,how are you today? Immense thanks for your visit and have a lovely Weekend...huggs
Date: 1/21/2015 7:08:00 PM
Kayod5, beautiful poem, congratulations on your win. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2015 9:33:00 PM
Today I'm fabulous, hubby treated me out to dinner, my sons and grandchildren or spoiling me, and I will be 64 Sunday, so I have been blessed. Thank you for asking, you are a wonderful poet and story teller. Blessings Eve
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/23/2015 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Eve. How are today?
Date: 1/21/2015 6:41:00 PM
Very creative, Kayod5! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/23/2015 9:03:00 PM
Hi Sandra,how are you today? Thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend....huggs
Date: 1/21/2015 7:58:00 AM
Full of great wisdom...I always love reading your poetry...congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/23/2015 9:04:00 PM
How are today Rhonda? Thank you for the visit and have a lovely Weekend....huggs
Date: 1/20/2015 11:26:00 PM
Showers of applause to your WIN Kayode! ;-)
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Teddy,have a lovely day...huggs
Date: 1/20/2015 10:20:00 PM
Brilliant take Kayode! Congrats on ur win!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Upma.
Date: 1/20/2015 7:30:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Debbie.
Date: 1/20/2015 3:29:00 PM
There is always wisdom in what you write, Kayode; animals usually react when they feel threatened. Congrats on your win my friend. // paul
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Paul.
Date: 1/20/2015 2:28:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:14:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 1/19/2015 10:54:00 PM
Humans can be cruel to the animals that seem to threaten them. But, it is difficult to know their true intentions since they cannot speak... You're the only one that I've seen to choose the rattlesnake as your inspiration. A very creative write, Kayode! Good luck in the contest!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:15:00 PM
Thank you Kelly.
Date: 1/19/2015 7:58:00 PM
Nicely done, dear friend.. Sure to be a winner!... Hugs... Arlene
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/20/2015 11:15:00 PM
Thank you Arlene.
Date: 1/17/2015 1:48:00 PM
Kayod5, this flows so beautiful with wild imagery, it is definitely a winner! Best wishes in the contest, my friend! Pandita.
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Date: 1/15/2015 4:14:00 PM
Very descriptive Kayod5 am thankful we don't have snakes around us here:-) Hugs jan xx
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/15/2015 5:50:00 PM
The Lord is good all the times,thank goodness we have no snake ...huggs
Date: 1/15/2015 3:06:00 PM
excellent pen really very beautifully painted piece
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/15/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thank you very much Liam,may the Lord of hosts reward your kindness...huggs
Date: 1/15/2015 11:03:00 AM
Enjoyed it Kayod.Love>>>rajat
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/15/2015 11:33:00 AM
Hi Rajat,thanks for the visit; I will soon be with you for the latest in town...huggs

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