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The "worst" Part of Being the Other Half

It feels like I’m losing you that connection it is slowly but surely slipping beyond my grasp, I’m scared, I don't want to lose the best thing in my life I don't want to say goodbye to the other half that makes me whole, I would miss everything about you, about us I’m not willing to let go I’m tying an invisible rope around us unseen and unbreakable because what we have doesn't have a name cannot be explained only felt, with no questions asked and no answers expected... 6TH PLACE In my "worst" poem ever Sponsored by: PD

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/23/2010 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in PD'S contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2010 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this fine contest..Sara

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/21/2010 8:40:00 PM

This is truly a wonderful piece and a heartfelt fear. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2010 2:37:00 PM

gosh, this looks very normal for me (well not normal for YOU but for a few poets I've read) This is not so bad, sweetie. Anyway, at least it got you a place in the top ten. WAY to go. LUv,Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2010 12:08:00 PM

Super congrats Wilma on your big win in P.D.'s contest for worst poem ever my friend.. though all your poetry is elegant and fine.. enjoy another big victory luv.. and a Happy Thanksgiving too..

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 10:52:00 AM

Wilma...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2010 9:57:00 AM

lovely rubbish, wilma... applause for bagging the prize in this clever, naughty contest.. warmest, nette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2010 9:21:00 AM

Good morning Wilma, not your usual poem,, kind of thought about this one for a while,, Until i said it to myself,,, well at least its a bad poem, and not ridiculous like some entries,, , Congratulations, Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.