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The World I See

The morning sun rolls around Here, like Tick Tock's on a clock Even the current of the sea is flowing Wallowing seagulls in there flock Only the sea breezes have ever seen Revealing, the sun begins to rise Laying upon a sight every one should see Dynamic rays of shine and Beautiful zodiacal lights In the Clouds where birds view from the sky heights Soon I wish to see with my own undying eyes Endless Beauty and essence Enchanting Love and harmony highs

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2009 7:40:00 PM

Having spent some time on the beach recently, I believe you have captured beautifully the sights and enchantment the ocean provides. Very nice wor, Cody! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/28/2009 11:52:00 AM

Cody, it was my pleasure to read your excellent piece of poetry today. I love acrostic form. Love, Carol

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/27/2009 5:15:00 PM

Well that was wonderful and peaceful. The nature seems to ooe right out of the poem. The ocean and all its nature and beauty. I sound like a woman huh? I am a man who loves the earth for what it is... you have explained it very well. Thank you for the read, enjoy your evening!

Bill Doggett

Date: 7/27/2009 3:01:00 PM

Interesting acrostic, great imaginatio, Bill

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/27/2009 12:12:00 PM

interesting..."my own undying eyes" Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2009 7:47:00 AM

Interesting descriptive piece. Sara