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the world

the world is  a child playing with a balloon on thorns

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  1. Date: 11/2/2010 3:43:00 PM
    Brief. This is a good quality. You really have something to say. Refreshing. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 9:08:00 AM
    This is a very interesting statement. Such simple words, but a deep meaning. Loved this, Honesty! Emilia:)

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 9:04:00 AM
    So true!!!!! and the goal is don't pop the dreams...thanks for our kind comments...Michael

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 8:32:00 AM
    friend,just one line but it contains a thousand thoughts.fine.fabiyas

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 5:49:00 AM
    What an interesting observation, Honesty. There are many times when I would agree with this! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem "New Deal." I chose "headline couplets" because the first line of each verse reads as a headline, but I like your suggestion as well! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 4:54:00 AM
    Yes, today's world offer many hazards , Honesty