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the words you wrote still rankle in my heart and though I try, I cannot find reprieve you act so well; oh, yes,you play the part no matter that you've made a heart to grieve you move on with your life and soon forget the one you've maimed with words and set on fire no care for hell on earth; you've no regret a body charred and burned, I'm on the bier and yet you wonder why I can't forgive you come to me with smiles and proffered gift but true forgiveness I have yet to give you've not apologized; there's still this rift A time of reckoning will one day be when answer you must give for hurting me Eileen "Love means always having to say you're sorry" (the TRUE love story).

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Date: 10/20/2015 11:02:00 AM
Your words snub forgiveness for your heart is not sorry but rather angry and confused dealing with its pain.
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Date: 10/20/2015 8:32:00 AM
I so agree, many people use love as an excuse to hurt others. For me my love relationship is the one I protect above all others.
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Date: 10/19/2015 11:16:00 PM
Heartfelt beautiful write Eileen.
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Date: 10/19/2015 2:08:00 PM
I can feel her heart hurting in your words Eileen. Sorry is such simple word but so hard to say with meaning
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