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The Words I Wanted To Say

The day I got you the day I got the world, The day you left me the day I left the world, Stars glittered in the evening of winters, The shine of them makes me cried, Winds whispered with the darkness of night, By see the glimmer of you I smiled, With the shadow of you I tied, The words you said I revised, To see a glimpse of you I'm blind, A glee of your voice is a peace of mine, From the light of you I inspired, To touch your soul I desired, To see a blossom of you I'm alive, The day I got you the day I got the world, The day you left me the day I left the world.

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Date: 1/23/2016 9:35:00 PM
EL SID:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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El Sid
Date: 1/24/2016 5:45:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 1/8/2016 10:42:00 PM
El Sid, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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El Sid
Date: 1/14/2016 3:27:00 AM
I'm happy to here :)
Date: 1/8/2016 1:57:00 PM
So Sid ,,,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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El Sid
Date: 1/14/2016 3:29:00 AM
hello ... :)

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