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The Wondering Blue Lake

The mountain wants to touch the sky, the sky also longs for its touch, together they come down and lie in crystal lake with pleasure much; surprised blue lake now just speechless wondering where to see its own face! © kash poet ================================= Placement:7th; (October 2011) Contest:Another Nature Verse Sponsor:John Freeman

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Date: 10/31/2011 10:29:00 PM
Tis the reflection that holds the key in this lovely verse. Beauty my friend.
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Date: 10/3/2011 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Another, Nature Verse" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2011 7:30:00 AM
Kash~You describe an intense romance between this mountain and sky. It is fascinating that you took each object in the photo and like a puzzle, fit them together so neatly. Poor blue lake is so taken by this connection that is doesn't know what to do! Beautiful poetry....placement means little when you create work such as this! Bless u this day. Gwendolen
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Date: 10/2/2011 5:49:00 PM
Kashinath, Thanks for you worthy poem in patronage to my contest, It is appreciated ver greatly. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/2/2011 1:56:00 AM
My apologies for taking so long to send congratulations but I have not been well. I am sending congrats now. Take care. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:55:00 PM
This is such a unique and creative way to view the sky and lake, Kash! congrats on your clever piece! ;)
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, kaSHINATH
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Date: 10/1/2011 10:28:00 AM
Well done Kashinath. Congratulations
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:29:00 AM
Congrats Kash on a marvelous win with lovely lines of poetic art my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/24/2011 11:34:00 PM
a dazzling portrait with these words Kash.. vibrant one..good luck my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:52:00 PM
Hey, kashinath, thanks for reminding me of what Nancy wanted us to put on our title heading for her contest! I had a nice day and wrote a poem. but I still have another one I need to write for Constance. How about you?
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Date: 9/24/2011 9:29:00 AM
a really delightful read, kashi...good way to calm my fever; i have the flu, awhhh! come! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/23/2011 11:17:00 PM
Very pretty and very INVENTIVE, Kash. I really like it! soupmail
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