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The Wonder of Birth In Parallel Universes

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Birth is an eternal wonder, ever-changing and evolving within parallel universes.

The brittle chrysalis, green and hard as a milkweed pod, hides nature’s pupa in cottony softness. Wrinkled and wet, a winged jewel emerges. Mother’s birth sac splits. Baptismal waters Spill her babe’s Soft flesh, fully formed Onto linen’s Glaring whiteness. Sunshine dries The butterfly’s Gossamer wings. Its silky whiteness shimmers transparently Against the opaque sun. A newborn squalls. Tiny fingers Curl in a tight ball. Each digit is a Prayer bead Chanting its presence. Wings and fingers Antennae and toes Displace space that Minutes before was Unknown, unclaimed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/29/2018 9:56:00 AM
This is lovely Kathleen.And I absolutely adore butterflies,such beautiful creatures.One Cabbage White just passed by my window. So this is a dedication to them from us both and a dedication to your writing such a beautiful piece.
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Date: 11/15/2017 12:45:00 AM
Another gem that is an example of excellent poetry Kathleen! Why I will always remain a big fan! Hugs, Connie : )
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 11/15/2017 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:25:00 AM
A fantastic piece of poetry, Kathy...truly Gobsmacked!! You ably demonstrate your innate trait here at its very strongest: strong observational powers; a trait that is evident throughout all of your excellent poetry...you have the critical eye of an Emily Dickinson! Really enjoyed this one; why is it on this site that some of the best poetry gets constantly overlooked in favour of, what at times, can only be described as - mere dross! Ahh well! My very warmest regards, Kathy...as always! :) john
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Date: 9/1/2017 6:58:00 PM
wow awesome,,,,well penned Kath love the rhythm and d vivid imagery u displaced in this. Big kudos to you
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 11/15/2017 7:56:00 AM
Thanks!! Much appreciated, Kathy
Date: 8/24/2017 4:55:00 PM
Hello Kathleen, I was intrigued by the title and now I am intrigued by your poem. Its is a very clever write, a parallel universe so different, yet so alike, thank you for sharing your poem, kind regards, Kevin
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:27:00 PM
Wonderful! :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:45:00 AM
Indeed... only in the parallel universe...
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:45:00 AM
Indeed... only in the parallel universe...
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Date: 8/24/2017 8:59:00 AM
your poem shows an astute awareness of life and its mysteries, both are fragile in their being... dear poet
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 8/24/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thanks, Frederic. I see the same characteristics in your poetry. Loved reading it this morning. Kathy

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