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The Woman In the Window

Can you see the woman in the window? She basks in the glow of the moment, donning a princess pink gown with a train of angel white. Nervous tears of joy stream down her vibrant face streaking her blushing cheeks a pallad hue of shadow blue. Can you see the woman in the window? She bathes in the light of renewed hope dressed in a large billowing top with teddy bears adorning the front. The sudden thrust of an innocent kick forces her to clutch her swollen belly, and a tender smile fades to a wince as motherhood pains begin to quicken. Can you see the woman in the window? she soaks in the brutality of the moment clothed in a torn cotton gown with crimson streaks down the front Like a doll thrown to the floor, she lay broken against the window her head twisted slightly askew with finger bruises around her neck. Her battered terror ravaged face pressed against a cracked window pain, like some macabre masterpiece. Two crystal blue eyes frozen in fear now free from the hands of oppression surrender a horrible unspoken truth. Huddled next to the cold lifeless body, a tiny teary-eyed little girl clutches a frail banded hand, and loudly whimpers the words: Mommy! Please wake up! Have you seen a woman in the window? Will she be there tomorrow...?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/22/2020 1:31:00 PM
Never seen a poem like this. I like it! It kept me interested and carried me through
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Date: 5/25/2013 5:07:00 AM
Kim....beauty turned to horror...No...this is too heavy a weight to bear. That little girl...having to see this. I read the comments below and I know this is inspired by real events..that is why it is so heart rending! May God have mercy on all those who are battered by brutes they call husbands...Moved beyond measure...
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/25/2013 5:17:00 AM
Thank You Eileen!
Date: 4/16/2013 10:11:00 PM
Love the word play- window pain. Sweet!Another cool verse! I'm already a fan. Always, Laura
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Date: 4/16/2013 9:24:00 PM
wow Kim, basking the heat of the moment... I like the thought and imagery. very unique! A sad feeling when reading the end... and following the little girl and her vision... always~ LINDA
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Kim Morrison
Date: 5/10/2013 7:56:00 PM
Wrote this a long time ago, but it still brings a tear to my eye because it is based on two women I knew as a child. One was beaten unrecognizable and the other was beaten to the brink of death by the men who were suppose to love them.

Book: Shattered Sighs