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The Woman

Flowers wilt as she passes close to them; Accidents happen when she becomes a pedestrian; Tea freezes when she touches her cup in a restaurant; Men forget they are married, and follow her sensual siren. Although she may be a “victim” of dark, coincidental “chain reaction” (according to her male suitors’ assumptions), invisible accusing fingers from Mother Nature or Law of Physics seem to be pointing at her. If Sherlock Holmes was here, he would first ask her why she always carries a golden apple with her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/6/2014 10:52:00 PM
LEWIS... :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 10:29:00 AM
Man. That was on point
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2014 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Lewis! :-)
Date: 7/31/2014 12:32:00 AM
Anytime...Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/1/2014 1:54:00 AM
^_^
Date: 7/30/2014 8:05:00 AM
Yes, Teddy, I was glad to see your poem on my list... thanks for the reply..Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/31/2014 12:00:00 AM
Welcome Linda! ^_^ <3
Date: 7/29/2014 5:56:00 PM
Heheh great! grats on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2014 2:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Casarah! ^_^
Date: 7/29/2014 5:37:00 PM
The teacher....great Teddy congrats
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2014 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Tim! :-)
Date: 7/28/2014 7:56:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations!!! Have fun enjoying the win. I'm grateful, everything went well when judging this contest. Take care, and enjoy my latest blog "Maybe I'm Invisible" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2014 1:53:00 AM
Thanks alot for your ever sweet kindness and applause Linda! I can't wait to see your blog, and see how it looks like! Love, Teddy <3 <3 ^_^
Date: 7/3/2014 9:03:00 AM
wow, what a woman. this is a most interesting one. I am trying to think why she has a golden apple too!! Is she Eve made golden?
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/4/2014 4:40:00 AM
I'll tell you who the special woman is, after you make two more guesses, lol. Thank you for your comment on my work Andrea!

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