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The Wolf's Tale

Whispered words from behind a wall to cronies gathered hale and tall. “Go on ahead.” He said. “Let me see.” “If I can turn her sweet, on me.” From within, she heard the tale, the rye snickers, the wolves’ wails. Yet, so like the doe in lantern light, the wail entranced, did not cause fright. Wide-eyed, stunned, the morsel stood, in frozen stance within the wood within his reach and steady glance, the wolf approached, as if to dance. With swaggering grace, he set fast pace, a honeyed tongued Knight on the chase. He spoke of honor of valorous deeds, of his manly virtues, and she took heed. “No, no, no,” said the Maid, she was shy. “I’m afraid.” She said. “Do I hear a lie?” He turned up her chin, and eye to eye, he stroked her cheek and heard her sigh. He offered her cake, this starving waif with trembling hands, she took the bait for upon his full lips , tongue and skin, she could taste the sugar deep within. He sought the warmth of blood and bone, he thought the conquest all his own. Yet, she held a hope buried deep within, to bring forth the goodness, she saw in him. Oh, she could well feel his aching need, 'twas his seedling soul, she sought to feed, the prey, prayed, long to touch his heart to give the wolf a brand-new start. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Many’s the times, his teeth came near to the blue-red vein in her throat, and many’s the time the Universe stopped like a dandelion seed afloat.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The wolf in him balked for a short time, tasted the joy of goodness’s wine; loving, and feeling, and drinking anew, what God has offered to each of you. Could he extinguish this pure light? Could he bring death to this delight? Sorry, for the prey was the wolf within. He was sore sorry; she’d let him begin. Sorry, he could not grow in her arms. Sorry, he could not succumb to her charms. “Sorry,” was on the tip of his tongue as he left, the prey on a run. “Sorry.” said she, as her soul rose higher, made stronger, though bathed in desire like the fabled Phoenix so, she rose, on the white wings of angels in repose. A prayer floated back, as she drifted above a prayer, she sent with her heart, to her love. It echoed his sentiment of so many days. “Sorry Love…” She said. “May the Wolf find his Way.”

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Date: 11/2/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win! ---Lori
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with this fine poem, Debbie
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Date: 10/31/2011 2:07:00 PM
This is wonderful. I haven't read the others yet. I sought yours out first. i don't know how they could have come ahead of it. Congratulations on a wonderful story. I am not acquainted with the Wolfman so I didn't try. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:55:00 PM
Love the length of this, and the last line particularly. Easily the coolest line with regards to the werewolf that I've seen in this contest.
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:55:00 PM
Debbie--this is a fabulous tale....your imagination is endless...Congratulations darling...You write those tiny tiny haikus so well, I didn't know you wrote in the longest form so well too. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful poem with darkness of lostness, played well with rimes. I enjoyed it. Have a nice week with your first place win, Debbie.
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:41:00 AM
Wow....Debbie, I'm speechless...this is so beautifully written, it opens the envelope and could be a story that many can relate! This poem stands alone among all the winners! Congratulations....so well deserved!!
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Date: 4/2/2011 6:03:00 AM
This was a real story, I am the woman ;) That's why it "rings" and also I'd like all to know it's at least the 3rd revision, we don't always write the "finisged product" the first pass at it! Thanks every one!
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Thvia, Deb
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:15:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! What a tale, and what a picture you painted; it ran like a movie before my eyes.. Just brilliant! Deb.sn Many congrats on your BIG. WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 1:45:00 AM
Amazing piece of poetry, artfully written. Heartiest Congratulations for your fabulous win. It was joy to read.. Love Gautami
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:59:00 PM
What a wonderful 'Hans Christian Andersson' type story, Debbie, just love this and obviously a very well deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 4/1/2011 11:53:00 PM
a great story and very well told ....holy mackerel, you tell sagas so effectively...I can't usually think beyond the next line or maybe next verse L O L ....congratulations Deb....you deserved to be in the winners circle
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Date: 4/1/2011 10:22:00 PM
Debbie this is abosolutely astounding. Wonderful piece. So happy you won no. 1 with it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:48:00 PM
What an awesome tale. many congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:48:00 PM
This piece drew me in like a child reading a fairy tale. Brilliant character development and skillful building of anticipation. I had no idea what to expect from one line to the next and I couldn't wait to find out! Perfect final line. Excellence my friend, thank you!
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:47:00 PM
Wow ..first place .. wow ..congrats Debbie for an awesome piece luv.. and so happy to be sharing first with u .. wow..
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:45:00 PM
wolverine rocks! HEADS UP for the greeat win, debs..:) huggs!
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:40:00 PM
Yeow! A vibrant piece, Debbie! Maybe YOU are somewhat Shamantic? This would certainly be a favorite legend that these people would love to tell by the fireside. Thank you for your comment...you'd hit the nail on the head. I'm still trying to figure you out!:)) I don't know a heck of a lot about shamanism. I'd been invited twice to sweat lodge, but for some reason or another, hadn't gone. I'll see what I can do about writing an entry. Best to you, Mikki
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Date: 3/29/2011 12:34:00 PM
I am speechles, a great write! Your creativity astounds me. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Debbie. It is so wonderful to see you writing and winning in the contests these days. You didn't seem to be writing much there for awhile but...here you are. Keep pumping them out my friend. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:57:00 PM
Uniquely original ..imaginative and creative write Debbie.. if for any contest ..good luck.. and WOW u have honored me so with 8th for "Time Tunnel" and I so appreciate.. was pleasantly surprised ..thankxx .. enjoyed...
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