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The Wise In Heart

The sun is going down Light the lamps For darkness claims the sight Five were wise and Five were foolish Trim the lamps came the cry When darkness comes It is too late to look for oil At midnight The bridegroom came He saw five lamps alight The wise He whisked away Work while you have the light of day For the nighttime comes When no one can work. ©? Brenda V northeast 6th January 2012

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Date: 10/1/2013 8:08:00 PM
This is a unique and creative write. Darkness falls and the fun ends. Sometimes. LOL nice job
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Date: 1/11/2012 7:52:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Brenda. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 1/11/2012 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Carol that is so very kind of you, blessings, Bren : )

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